YOU WIN SOME AND YOU LOSE SOME

In September, 46% of people told Washington Post/ABC news poll
that the war on terror was worth fighting. Some of the families of those lost
on 9/11 would agree with this 46%. Some columnists such as ones in the
Washington Post as well as the New York Times, write pro war columns agreeing
with the continuation and belief of success of the war. Families and columnist
are not alone. Politician John McCain backs these decisions as well. They feel
that a victory could very much be taken as long as America sticks to its goals
with their eyes wide open. A victory would mean safety in America, control and
peace in Afghanistan. John McCain says it is a must to succeed in Afghanistan
due to the violence and hatred from terrorist that led to the attack against
our country. He also says in a special to CNN, "I believe that the fight
in Afghanistan is critical to our national security. Our goals there are
achievable and success is worth the continued sacrifice."
It is time for the war in
Afghanistan to come to an end. There is no victory in staying in a war that
could take a life time. Yes we as a country endured an unforgettable tragedy on
9/11, but why add to more casualty. Since President Obama has been in office,
there has been 1,188 U.S. military deaths in the Afghan war. Not only have we
lost troops, but Afghan civilians are being killed as well. This is like
sentencing an innocent man, woman or child to death. Robert Bales woke up one
night and murdered sixteen Afghan civilians, nine which were children for
reasons no one can explain. "Even Afghan President Hamid Karzai rebuffed
President Obama's apology and proclaimed this act 'unforgiveable'" as
stated by Ross Kaminsky in the article titled 'Massacre in Afghanistan: Proof
the U.S. should leave?' How can we protect these people if we are killing them?
Sometimes you can not change those of different decent, upbringing and culture.
Andrew Sullivan at the Daily Beast states, "Our cultures are far to far
apart to mesh and the more we insist on succeeding with an unwinnable
transition, the deeper into the mire we go." The longer we try to force a
way of living on their government, the more lives will be ended and the more
hatred will grow. The price of war is in the billions and our economy is
already down. This war is not worth bankrupsy and casualty. You lose some and
you win some, this war is lost and victory has no face.
1. In USA
Today: Afghanistan: Americas Longest War Rick Hampson states that the U.S.
Army attacked Afghanistan on Oct. 7, 2001. On June 7th will complete its 104th
month.
2.
"I believe that the fight in Afghanistan is critical to our
national security. Our goals there are achievable and success is worth the
continued sacrifice." -John McCain says on Oct. 28, 2009 to CNN
3. According to the Washington Post/ ABC
News poll: In September 51% told them that the war was not "worth
fighting", only 46% said it was.
4. Edwin Mora states '1,188 U.S. military
deaths in Afghan war since Obama became president. (cnsnews.com)
5.
"Our cultures are far to far apart to mesh and the more we insist
on succeeding with an unwinnable transition, the deeper into the mire we
go." - Andrew Sullivan says in the Daily Beast.
Dwayne,
ReplyDeleteGreat article! Your craft is developing well. Your blogs are getting consistent and ever more clear.
I have one suggestion: between the opposing view paragraph and your analysis, try to write a transitional sentence, so that the reader knows that you are shifting opinions.
Great work. I enjoy reading your pieces every week. Keep it up, we're almost there!
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