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A tragedy in America changed the
lives of many men, woman and children. On September 11th 2001 terrorist invaded planes and
struck three of the most populated buildings in the United States a state of shock spread around all citizens
and everyone went into a panic mode. George Bush, the president at this tragic
time, and the rest of the government were pushed to make instant decisions on
how to retaliate. Some of their decisions may have been unjust but others may
have been right on target. We went to
war in Afghanistan and soon after Iraq.
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People
who would say that America overreacted are wrong because when a countries
safety is at stake you have to make swift decisions. Going to look for Osama Bin Laden and other
Al-Qaeda members was exactly what necessary.
People who feel as though Bush was wrong or should have tried a
different approach would probably argue that Bush had no business invading
Iraq. As far as invading Iraq goes Bush
was wrong for that because there was never a clear reason as to why we went to
war with them, although Bush stated they had weapons of mass destruction it was
never proven.
I do not think America overreacted because we
have not had a terrorist attack since September 11th. Although some decisions made were not the
best on President Bush’s behalf Osama Bin Laden has been captured along with
other high ranking Al-Qaeda members. As
an American citizen I do feel safer since these actions have been taken. We have also stopped other terrorist from
going through with their plans to destroy America, like the “Shoe Bomber”
Richard Reed. He is now in prison for
life without the possibility of parole.
As a country since this attack we have come together and cracked down on
people who want to hurt us, and made a example out of the people that attacked
us on that devastating day.
(2003, january 30). "Shoe Bomber" sentenced to life in prison. pbs.com retrieved Febuary 16, 2012, from http://www.pbs.org/newshour/updates/reid_01-30-03.html
"A Boston judge handed down a life sentence Wednesday for Richard Reid, the alleged al-Qaida member who pleaded guilty to attempting to blow up a jetliner using explosives in his shoe."
(2011, September 3). The terrorist notches on Obama's belt. abcnews.go.com retrieved Febuary 16, 2012, from http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2011/09/the-terrorist-notches-on-obamas-belt/
"The list of senior terrorists killed during the Obama presidency is fairly extensive.
There’s Osama Bin Laden, of course, killed in May..."
"A Boston judge handed down a life sentence Wednesday for Richard Reid, the alleged al-Qaida member who pleaded guilty to attempting to blow up a jetliner using explosives in his shoe."
(2011, September 3). The terrorist notches on Obama's belt. abcnews.go.com retrieved Febuary 16, 2012, from http://abcnews.go.com/blogs/politics/2011/09/the-terrorist-notches-on-obamas-belt/
"The list of senior terrorists killed during the Obama presidency is fairly extensive.
There’s Osama Bin Laden, of course, killed in May..."
Dwayne,
ReplyDeleteGood post. You sound very informed on the issue. I need you to make the following improvements to boost your grade.
1. check for spelling/grammar errors. There are a few ones to spot and check. Have someone proofread it.
2. Your second paragraph should be about a person or institution that disagrees with you. You started it off right, but then give an example and a quote by someone who did think that the US overreacted. That's why I gave you the article, so that you could find that opponent in there somewhere. Be specific.
Other than that, I am impressed with your effort and energy. I can tell that you're putting in the time, and that will get you there.
GR: 88